In class, we had to show other groups our rough edit of our horror opening so far, and my partner and I had a mixture of positive and negative feedback. My class stated that they liked the fact that a part of the footage was in slow motion because the class had a clear view of the victim's facial expression and how scared she was. Also, the class liked the idea of the use of the time and clocks that we showed in our video.
However, the class criticised that the video transition from the victim to a close up of the clock was childish and was not adequate to use in a horror film and that the opening titles needs to be smaller.
To help my partner and I, the class recommended that we should use a video transition from the station to the street, to prevent the cut from being jumpy and to use more sound effects to keep the audience intensed. Furthermore, the class suggested that we may need to re-record the scream at the end because they didn't feel the victim was scared enough as the scream wasn't powerful enough.
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